He reigned
And then
He resigned
When his will was done
All was gone
Teacake
Greg
LipStickLez
ElderLez
(Already dead)
God said
Drake said
DJ
Khaled.
God did
| by Anonymous | reply 30 | December 3, 2023 2:41 PM |
If I was still smoking weed, this would be a wonderful poem. But this does nothing for my current glue sniffing addiction. Sorry.
| by Anonymous | reply 1 | November 13, 2023 7:45 PM |
It’s really a piece of shit poem.
| by Anonymous | reply 2 | November 13, 2023 8:03 PM |
This could be set to music as a patio number in "DL: The Musical!"
| by Anonymous | reply 3 | November 13, 2023 8:14 PM |
He IS God!
| by Anonymous | reply 4 | November 13, 2023 8:37 PM |
R3, do you mean a patter song?
| by Anonymous | reply 5 | November 13, 2023 8:48 PM |
Stupid is as stupid does
| by Anonymous | reply 6 | November 13, 2023 8:56 PM |
Really Stooopid thread.
| by Anonymous | reply 8 | November 13, 2023 10:26 PM |
You’re gonna be ok, OP. Hang in there.
| by Anonymous | reply 9 | November 13, 2023 10:43 PM |
Rumors of my death are greatly exaggerated OP.
| by Anonymous | reply 10 | November 13, 2023 11:13 PM |
Thankfully, ElderLez.
| by Anonymous | reply 11 | November 13, 2023 11:23 PM |
[quote]do you mean a patter song?
Yes, freewheeling patter and pâté on the patio.
| by Anonymous | reply 12 | November 13, 2023 11:26 PM |
OP - Were you wearing a beret and playing the bongos when you wrote that?
| by Anonymous | reply 13 | November 13, 2023 11:28 PM |
The person who claimed Elderlez died should be locked up by the Feds for cyber bullying. Yep that’s what I said.
| by Anonymous | reply 14 | November 13, 2023 11:30 PM |
^ r12
| by Anonymous | reply 16 | November 13, 2023 11:39 PM |
!Lol
| by Anonymous | reply 17 | November 14, 2023 12:19 AM |
The days when Miss Lindzebelle visited the baths of Istanbul.
| by Anonymous | reply 18 | November 14, 2023 12:27 AM |
... another one.
| by Anonymous | reply 19 | November 14, 2023 12:31 AM |
Exquisite, R19.
| by Anonymous | reply 20 | November 14, 2023 12:35 AM |
The Senatrice inspected the merchandise in r18’s photo, and told her guide to have the three on the right boil washed and shipped to DC.
| by Anonymous | reply 21 | November 14, 2023 12:36 AM |
How my bitxhes
| by Anonymous | reply 22 | November 16, 2023 8:27 AM |
West side
| by Anonymous | reply 23 | November 18, 2023 12:55 AM |
Classiqué
| by Anonymous | reply 24 | December 2, 2023 10:03 AM |
Keep my name out of that motherfucking mouth.
| by Anonymous | reply 25 | December 2, 2023 5:56 PM |
I’ve always been terrible with poetry because it feels like the poet wants me to unlock a riddle and I usually can’t tell if they are pretty enough to be worth the time.
Anyway, does the parenthetical clause “(Already dead)” belong at the beginning of the poem, meaning God is dead?
Is somebody home for Winter Break? No touching yourself for the old pervs, OP!
| by Anonymous | reply 26 | December 2, 2023 6:05 PM |
What if God was one of us?
Just a slob like one of us.
| by Anonymous | reply 27 | December 2, 2023 6:14 PM |
God would keep that name out that mouth.
| by Anonymous | reply 28 | December 2, 2023 9:21 PM |
Yeah fuck Teacake!
| by Anonymous | reply 29 | December 3, 2023 2:24 AM |
R26 the message is evident.
| by Anonymous | reply 30 | December 3, 2023 2:41 PM |